Critique my recipe?

[Biscuit]

HI Guys,

I'd love your views on my first proper 'from scratch' recipe.

Vaguely inspired by Cosmic Fogs Sonset, love the taste, but hate the price

8% Capella Pear
3% TFA Brown Sugar
3% Flavour West Salted caramel
3% TFA Vanilla Custard
1% TFA Bavarian Cream

I'm vaping 3mg 60%VG, and it doesn't really need more than 24 hours steeping.

See what you think, and I'd love your feedback.

 

[Mr Numpty]

What do you think of it?

 

[Biscuit]

Valid Question!

I'm all about bakery/ pudding recipes, and like them sweet.

This is pretty smooth, the Bavarian cream really helped with that - it was a little harsh without it. The caramel comes through quite strong at first, and you're left with the pear as an aftertaste. it's almost got a smokey taste to it too.

As a shake and vape, I'm loving it, but would love to hear from some more experienced mixers, or suggestions for improvement.

 

[westy]

Looks good personally would knock the pear down to 4% and add 4%fuji apple or something with a better profile of flavour than pear

 

[Biscuit]

Cheers Westy. Would that improve the pear flavour, or change it significantly?

I guess if pear wasn't your thing, then any fruit could be subbed for it.