thank you so muchfor you criticism i really apretiate it
i actually said it was made from altum which is a plastic material
and as i said this was a test for an idea i had to see the review on a day to day basis yes this one might of been too long but its a work in progress and people like you giving their opinions will help better. i did the 2 builds to show how forgiving the deck was and its not very forgiving with larger coils. im sorry i forgot to put in the squinker but it does work well as a squonk atty.so in your opioion this style of review is not worth doing and i will consider you opinion if i move forword with this format
thanks again BRO means alot
Alrighty, not specifially aimed at your review but...
When i watch a review vid, it's with the intention to either, buy it, or wick/coil it.
I know what a box looks like, so unless the box is special or different, like the moonshot tin, just lay everything on the table, out of the box and point as you explain. I don't need to see every face of the box. I don't need to be read what it says. I don't need close ups of the spare orings, or instruction manual.
List the colours/options available, rough price etc then the measurements, If possible, showcase it on a few mods. This is what it looks like on a ... And a ..., But i prefer it on a... Because...
As you strip it down, explain briefly what each part is/does what it's made of and any drawbacks/limitations, and anything that's unique.
Then move onto the coiling. Key info: post hole size /deck type & what's going to fit, what ain't. Single dual etc etc. Make your recommendation to the best and show how and why you wick it the way you do.
Have a reference point.
It's a tight/airy draw... Compared to a Nautilus mini / subtank / exo / etc. Your tight and my tight, wayyyyyyyyy different.
I like the idea of a diary like segment, 1 day 3 day 1 week, but keep them short and sweet. Even if you say what day 1 and 3 were then cut to a vid of day 7. Mention any drawbacks, how the coils doing, does it drink juice, ramp times, annoyances.
Try to answer any questions you think i might have during the review.
End off with why should/shouldn't i buy it? Be honest though. Giving positive and negatives.
Reviewers that love every single product, i can't be assed with them. Usually sponsored. If it's mediocre, say.
Am i better off buying something else?
As far as testing with a juice. I'm Vaping xyz, wow that's good. Kinda pointless without reference. I'm picking up more or less flavour than usual / a...
But above all, the thing that pisses me off the most...
Background/fade/highlight music. I want to hear you, not your sound track. I want to see you build, i don't want it sped up, i don't want a loud musical background.
Honest detailed reviews is what we need.